Standing alone in the evening of heavy rains,
And looking upwards to the dark sky,
With full of storming thunders,
And many dark clouds around.
I started Praying for more and more
Of such lashes of heavy rain,
On my body, on my mind and on my soul;
So that it could wash away my past,
It could wash away all my unknowingly sins,
It could wash away my baseless ego,
It could wash away my useless anger,
It could wash away my earthly beliefs,
It could wash away my wrongdoings,
It could wash away ME.
I am looking to GOD;
Like a baron infertile land,
Waiting for ages for the misty drops,
Drops of love,
Drops of harmony,
Drops of life,
Drops of laughter,
Drops of joy,
Drops of bliss.
Let me begin again a new dawn of life
After this heavy night of rain,
With a whispering sound of fresh air,
With a glittering vision for the road ahead,
And with a zest for the life, which I never lived.
O My Dear GOD,
Please transform me again into a new child
Again Full of strength,
Full of laughter and full of joy,
O GOD, please bless me again
For a new life!!!
God bless you.....i also pray for you...
ReplyDeleteA nice poem menifesting benign pleadings for a really enhanced life.
ReplyDeleteA nice poem indeed......seems all the feelings are frozen and transformed into words.....
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ReplyDeleteUnbreakableSoul -
I could relate to this
Title / intro is: Nice
My favorite line is: "Standing alone in the evening of heavy rains"
Reading your poem was so enjoyable to me. It's as if I am reading words I would like to express for my life and God. You have used some wonderful tone/impact/imagery and metaphor in your prayer poem to God. It is such a lovely poem. Only he can give us a new life after the first one he has blessed us with. Great job! Very well done
Geneva
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I liked it , thanks!
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ReplyDeleteThis is a very personal, spiritual poem you have created here. Your faith shines through the words you have used in order to open up your poem for your reader to experience. The title you have chosen for this particular write is very well reflected in the body of your poem. I find these words very refreshing:
"Let me begin again a new dawn of life
After this heavy night of rain,
With a whispering sound of fresh air,
With a glittering vision for the road ahead,
And with a zest for the life, which I never lived."
Well done, can you add your prompt choice number to your author notes please? so we know which one you used for inspiration for your poem.
Katie
Greeter Team Leader
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ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful poem you have written. The strength within your words resonates in the mind long after the closing lines have ended. I too find the rain to be a sort of cleansing agent. Everything feels so fresh and new and clean after a heavy rain. Very nicely done.
~Kimberly